Friday, August 03, 2007

Pointless poetry exercise #2

When in doubt - triolet it!
I leave this at your ear
for when you wake; the babe
is sleeping now. I fear
to leave this at your ear
because it might appear
like I'm, you know, ashamed -
I leave this at your ear
for when you wake your babe.
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  1. Eloise10:24 pm

    I think you should leave the last line as 'the babe'. Funny, I was thinking of triolet-ing it too.

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